Before re-editing
After hearing feedback of my teacher. I needed to tweak my magazine slightly, I have done so and here is my new layout, as you can see I have made the writing on the side more organised and centred. I have also moved the second smaller image into the top left hand corner and added the image into a skyline and board at the top of the page so that the image doesn't look out of place. Another big part of the changes I have made was the masthead. I have changed the font and size of it, in order to fit in with my target audience, I have also changed the main image so that it will relate to my double page spread.
After editing
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